A
long time friend, market researcher, mother of one and an energetic editor’s
message flashed at the right bottom corner of my computer screen. “Do you read
stories?” read the text, no “hi” no
“Hello” – to the point, terse and direct
– but that’s her style. (One that I have come to appreciate a lotJ)
“Yes,”
I wrote back, “Why” was added as an afterthought and quickly followed that
with, “It depends on the story actually yaar, but in general I like stories.”
“Why
do you like stories?” she further asked, in quintessentially market researcher
style. I knew this was a beginning of one of the very interesting conversations and I had to gather my thoughts well for it. so I asked her for some time and
told that I will compose my response and share it over the email next year. (It
was last week of December so she was quite cool with my deadline.)
Following
are my thoughts about what makes me like stories. If a story is good on
following points, I like reading/listening to it.
1. Characters:
They give life to the events in stories; they are the ones we relate ourselves
to. Figment of authors’ imaginations or reflections of her reality, characters
that stay with us for long are the ones that touch a chord in our heart. It is said of characters that, a writer should
know a lot more of the character than he puts down in a story, only when you
know each of your character that well, can they come to life and stay alive for
long. Best example of how long a character lives can be found right from the
characters of holy books to the heroes of bollywood movies.
Of
story-tellers I have read, I find Tagore best as far as knowing his character
is concerned. He demonstrates amazing dexterity at presenting his characters
that you almost start believing that they are real people taken out of our own
lives. Another one comes to mind when it comes to being extremely adept at
presenting characters is P.G. Wodehouse, Reginald Jeeves and Bertram Wooster –
his most famous characters are still quite alive in minds of his readers. Similar
examples can be found in more popular parlance of bollywood as well, for
example Bob Biswas of a film Kahani and Phaijal of Gangs of Wasseypur are some
of the characters that stick in one’s mind for long time even after one has
watched the film.
2.
Storyline: Imaginative and captivating storylines are must for a good story,
there has to be an event about which you would like to talk. Every situation
for which you can hold someone’s hand and say “Hey listen… “is a potential of
an awesome story. J
Storyline is the one which provides space to the author to paint story in her
favourite colours. You can weave suspense, drama, surprise, romance and various
other themes that most interest you through the storyline.
For
story-lines, I find R.K. Narayanan most interesting. Not only because of the
delicate fabrics that he weaves his stories with but also because the great
care he takes in painting smaller details of the plot. It takes great sensitivity to take care of all
those details in one’s storyline. Popularly famous for his lyrics in Bollywood,
Gulzar is also one of the writers whose storylines are very good, rich and
engaging.
3. Dialogues: Storyline and characters are
skeleton of a story, they way they interact, behave and unfold are the flesh
and blood, hence we remember most characters and dialogues, “Kitne
aadmi the?”
In
terms of dialogues, best example is timeless genius, Shakespeare. Another
playwright, I have had a chance to read, Arthur Miller, (Marilyn Monroe fame)
has been extremely engaging with his dialogues. In Bollywood, Vishal Bhardwaj, carries flames
ignited by Shakespeare and writes really good dialogues in some of his films.
4. Sequencing/
(screenplay): This refers to the order in which incidents happen in the story,
one must bear in mind that reader doesn’t have any background of the story you
are telling. So you need to be detailed without sounding dragging. This balance
is a key to interesting and engaging story-telling/writing. J There are no formulas
but practice usually helps getting it right.
Any
page turner book will usually be awesome on its screenplay as, it is sequencing
that mainly drives suspense, and keeps readers hooked to it. Harry Potter and some of the other thrillers
are good examples of able sequencing of events in stories.
One
tip that I personally find useful is to tell a lot of stories in day to day
life, describe events to friends, parents, spouses, elders, kids whosoever
listens to you. Try and make them fall in love with what you describe.
1 comment:
Thanks a lot for this post!!! in fact I'm trying a hand at fiction right now. This would be a great help indeed.
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